Feedback

Out of the 3 person group I only ended up with one feedback paper to look at while working on my final draft. I sent my final draft to the other girl in my group so she could fill out her feedback sheet and e-mail me back a more in depth feedback because I only had my first two, very short, paragraphs done last week. However, the girl that did give me my sheet filled out was very pleased with what I had written. She did pose a few questions that I was able to work off of and make sure I answered in my memoir and listed a few comment I could work with. There is nothing she said that I will disregard but one question that stuck out to me as extremely important that I didn't think to make my reader aware of was that this was the first time I discussed this topic with someone and it was the first time I was experiencing it. It will absolutely help to make my story more clear and easy to understand by my readers. Until the feedback from the other girl is mailed to me that is all I can really comment on.